Why is this popular?

Present tense whatnot. Ill take this and try to write alittle in Uplift Protocol setup just to see how awkward it is.

There is a Keeper in the lower decks.
(The Keeper is a metaphor for darkness and inhuman pitiless eyes!)
(The Lower deck could rightly be considered a prison!)
The Keeper was placed here for numerous acts of hideous experiments against sentient creatures.


One of the Typherian guards said throw away the key but it rests on the grav lock near the prison doors.

Yea, just shoot me now. Its like they are writing how people talk. It's very jarring if its outside of dialog.

I use brackets to indicate different kinds of talk <<Word>> for coms and Bardaxian. ///Message/// for text talk, ((Word)) for Horus and some other AI talk. But you have to set that up within a pattern.